my twins...
It was the last day of joy at school. We said goodbye
to masters, head teachers and other staff. Me and friends were depressed the
whole day, the whole time, that day after the exam I met my brothers (my twins), He said he will be late as has on a trip with his friends,
and told me to catch the boys bus, that was pathetic as the boys driver rides
really fast, so with fear I waited at station. I was not at all confident and
was having second thoughts for taking the bus. Soon the bus arrived and as I
was left with no choice my direful journey began. As usual the boys were happy
as the bus moved really fast. Soon we turned to my village. Maybe because of
the weather my head started aching, but in a while we arrived at the station
and I found my brothers waiting. when I got out my face looked pale and my eyes
were filled in in tears , my brother were shocked by my look and was really
worried .they thought it was due to the test and began questioning. I told them
about Najm taking the trip and will be late. Even though they forced to go home
I demanded to stay and wait for him. There was no sign of him even after long
hours of waiting. We all started worrying as he was a silent young kid. The
watch showed 3pm and the weather was hot and humid. I could on more stand the
heat and started feeling dizzy. And when I open my eyes I found myself in the
hospital with Najm sleeping next to me. The end ….
Really .You are a good writer and you have Imagination ..I like it
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ReplyDeleteIt anice story. It teaches us the value of our life.
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Nice story, I like it 😍
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good imagination dear..you did good work..keep it up..
ReplyDeletegood imagination dear..you did good work..keep it up..
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ReplyDeleteNice subject 😍
ReplyDeleteNice drawing, but about the short story, where was najm the whole time, what happened to him??
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